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Reviewer: sk.3.7.64.hi.bob Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Mar 25, 2011 6:30 AM Title: Fire in the forest
long story ............hahaha but funny
Reviewer: Sylistra the scholar Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Sep 06, 2007 4:06 PM Title: Fire in the forest
okay the story needed a lot of work and the plot is iffy, but Great divide needs to shut their mouth, because you don't have to be a in your second year of High school to be an excellant writer. I am a Freshman and I could outwrite you with my hands tied behind my back, while typing with my teeth My real advice: take it slow, try to think about the plot. AND BE MATURE FOR GOD's SAKE!!! Don't say people suck because they are telling you what is right (Sarunkai). It is immature to be a baby. I posted on a story that was if possible worse then yours, when I got critisism I took it like an adult even though I was twelve. Two years later with a lot of practice on one story I am a fantastic Author coming to my fifteenth b-day. Anyway don't review your own work unless you are honest and for crying out loud read the box labels! I give no rating because there isn't a low enough option.
Reviewer: legendary lovejoy Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Jun 30, 2005 1:17 PM Title: Fire in the forest
fist of all ur stories gay, second of all its too short and third of all PUT THE STORY IN THE TEXT NOT IN THE SUMMARY U PILLOCK!!!!!!
Reviewer: Great Divide Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Jun 10, 2004 8:41 PM Title: Fire in the forest
Are you still in pre-school or something? Don't waste peoples time with this unless you have completed two years of high school and very good at writing, like a good few of people who read here. ~GD~
Reviewer: Otaku Hitoko Anonymous [Report This]
Date: May 20, 2004 10:01 PM Title: Fire in the forest
Um, dude, you do realize that there's a reason for that typing box, right?
Reviewer: Kestrel Anonymous [Report This]
Date: May 02, 2004 12:54 AM Title: Fire in the forest
Dont Complament Yourself Weivle