Reviewer: Sylistra the scholar Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Sep 06, 2007 4:06 PM Title: Fire in the forest

okay the story needed a lot of work and the plot is iffy, but Great divide needs to shut their mouth, because you don't have to be a in your second year of High school to be an excellant writer. I am a Freshman and I could outwrite you with my hands tied behind my back, while typing with my teeth My real advice: take it slow, try to think about the plot. AND BE MATURE FOR GOD's SAKE!!! Don't say people suck because they are telling you what is right (Sarunkai). It is immature to be a baby. I posted on a story that was if possible worse then yours, when I got critisism I took it like an adult even though I was twelve. Two years later with a lot of practice on one story I am a fantastic Author coming to my fifteenth b-day. Anyway don't review your own work unless you are honest and for crying out loud read the box labels! I give no rating because there isn't a low enough option.

Reviewer: DarkXGlitch Signed [Report This]
Date: May 25, 2007 10:04 AM Title: Fire in the forest

This story doesn't even deserve a very generous half a star.

Reviewer: Burn Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 03, 2005 11:27 PM Title: Fire in the forest

Don't put the story where it says "summury" put it where it says "text".

Reviewer: Otaku Hitoko Anonymous [Report This]
Date: May 20, 2004 10:01 PM Title: Fire in the forest

Um, dude, you do realize that there's a reason for that typing box, right?

Reviewer: Raven Signed [Report This]
Date: May 01, 2004 11:21 AM Title: Fire in the forest

Um, ok. Nothing showed up on that. Oh thanks for the review [slight sarcasm there]