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Reviewer: dekudiva Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 02, 2007 1:24 PM Title: Waking the Wind

Ooh! Wow, that was really well done! Okay, I have lots of more reading in front of me though...I have to read the other four!

Reviewer: Ev Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 09, 2005 1:04 AM Title: Shadow Revealed

oaky, i finished it all.......and that last bit....to me anyways, was confusing...hmm maybe if i read the whole thing over! heh, yea right, i still gotta read the others, maybe then it would make more sense o.0 bai4 now

Reviewer: Ev Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 08, 2005 2:19 AM Title: Link's Decision

It's like another challenge (in sum random game somewhere) that Link must face. Be emotionally prepared to fight Princess Zelda in half an hour!!! haha, sorry, that was quite the random blurb....>_>; *wants to read more but ish tired and needs her sleep* NIGHty...n-nite... *falls asleep on keyboard*

Reviewer: Ev Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 08, 2005 1:40 AM Title: Reunion

Ah, this is nothing like I had expected it to be...very nice details, it gives me a good image of what's happening ( and good thing i watch my bro play zelda or else i'd be utterly confused about who's running where! lol) *thumbs up*

Reviewer: Ev Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 08, 2005 1:07 AM Title: Anniversary!

AUGH! cliff hanger! (too many of those!) good thing this story goes on for a whilez ^.^

Reviewer: Supreme Ruler Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 17, 2005 9:24 AM Title: Waking the Wind

Hah, that was awesome! I have been meaning to read this, and now I finally have! It was great, keep up the amazing work! Off to read the next one!

Reviewer: Hyperlink Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 09, 2005 7:03 PM Title: Shadow Revealed

Man, I can't believe I hadn't read this before, I was missing out! Great touch of suffering, both physically and emotionally, and an interesting ending for sure. Now, onto the sequels! Great job!

Reviewer: OneSexyCrocodile Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 10, 2005 9:58 PM Title: Waking the Wind

very impressed! that kicked some major ass! i liked how u linked OoT w/ WW like that! very well written, too.

Reviewer: RavenTay Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 31, 2005 2:17 PM Title: A Set-up

Alright! Awesome chappie with Saria faking to switch sides! That was so cool and this story is dark, and I luv those types of fics... Keep it up!

Author's Response: Yeah, its a gift jk! ^_^ Anyways, I'm having a few second thoughts about the ending..it might be a bit...uhm...controversial. Anyways, its not like I have writer's block or anything (just a little) but...hmm...whatever. Thanks for the review and stuff, check back for an update soon! ^.^;;

Reviewer: Burn Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 30, 2005 6:06 PM Title: Shadow Revealed

Good job with this. It's coming along great

Reviewer: Incognito Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 30, 2005 2:18 AM Title: Another Roadblock

Wow! Really good story thus far...really good cant wait to see the outcome...: )

Reviewer: EliteWarrior Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 26, 2005 9:53 PM Title: Shadow Revealed

EEEEEEK!1 *ahem* Very...gory. And I agree with Jim. Fantastic storyline, but scary/frightening stories always end better when you find out about the cloaked figure at the end. Meh, whatever, I'll believe about your "More twists" thing. I thought for a long time, but I chose 10/10. Why? Because you were willing to try a new type of story writing than what most people use. Although I hated Vanilla Sky, your back-and-forth storyline makes much more sense.

Author's Response: Well, to tell you all the truth, I've been going back and forth between releasing the infamous "chapter zero" aka, "intro" that you all have been somewhat complaining about. In the end, I've decided to go with my instincts and let you know beforehand who the "cloaked figure" was. I thought it would help draw you in, since you know what would happen...just not how.

Reviewer: Quite_Gone_Jim Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: Jan 26, 2005 4:35 AM Title: Shadow Revealed

Pretty good, though, it lacks a certian amount of tension, or suspence. In the first chapter you find out straight away who the cloaked figure is. I find it would be better if you put in the scene where Link discovers what Zelda is doing before Saria reveals her alternate universe idea. It would just be a bigger shock, if you understand me. I know its just the beginning but try to hold back the revealing of information until the climax so its like a big twist. I find stories like that are the best. Awseome idea though. 9/10.

Author's Response: Thanks, don't worry too much there will be WAY more twists coming soon. hahaha! And when the story does end, I'm looking for this response: "Oh...I see!! THATS what happened!! COOL!" if not, then I have failed as an author ^.^;;

Reviewer: Burn Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 19, 2005 10:39 PM Title: Shadow Revealed

My god... unbelivably frightening...



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