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Reviewer: LHOA_LHOF Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: Sep 18, 2005 12:02 PM Title: no chapters

Well yes it is random but randomness is a good thing. such as I always say;LONG LIVE THE RANDOMNESS AND THE BAD POLKA MUSIC!!!(LHOA)

Author's Response: randomness is fine by me, but, the polka, well, whatever.

Reviewer: Aryll Windwaker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 18, 2005 9:49 AM Title: no chapters

i love it, yo! you eva read hyrule gone ghetto by HYRULE TRASH 64? we wrote it togedah, biotch! uh, yeah, it is so totally gangsta. i don't think moomoomilkcow liked it though. unless it was the greatest question ever he didn't like. oh well. i loved the rap, but it was a little tought to read, considering it was written like prose. next time though, make it like an actual poem, i guess. 10/10

Author's Response: well, it fit the poetry catagory more than the fanfic catagory. and if the cow dude doesn't like it he doesn't like it. its good to get bad reveiwss too. and he also corrected my spelling

Reviewer: moomoomilkcow Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: Sep 18, 2005 12:11 AM Title: no chapters

wasn't really "gangsta" enough to be a rap. And it is rap, not wrap. I'm guessing you worked hard on it, so 9/10 for the effort.

Author's Response: is that really how u spell, it. i wasn't realy going for gangsta, more like comedic, ill have to fix the spelling thanx.



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