Reviewer: Hyperlink Signed [Report This]
Date: May 22, 2005 6:01 PM Title: One Fell Morning

Great start; foreboding feelings, empathetic characters, and the begining of an interesting story line with good descriptions and writing. I'll look foreward to your updates! Great job!

Author's Response: Thank you for your comment, and I will continue once I have everything smoothed out. Maybe I'll talk to you later. n_n