Reviewer: Red Sparrow Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 18, 2005 9:14 AM Title: Lost Childhood

Nicely written, it has a nice flow to it! Theres one problem with it and I'm pretty sure that it's a typo. If you quickly skim through it, I know you'll find it. Fortunately for you, I'm not a really strict reviewer, so it gets the Glamorous 10/10!!! Wooot! ...sorry.

Author's Response: Umm...okay...I feel stupid. I can't find a typo in it... Maybe I'm just a bad speeler...