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Reviewer: EliteWarrior Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: Apr 18, 2005 6:39 PM Title: Ganon defeated

It was extremely good. Although the lines were pretty short, there were a few stanzas for it. However, I can't give you a ten, since there were a few too many Near Rhymes than I would've preferred. But that doesn't mean it's bad. I'd give it a 9.5 if I could. It's awesome, but not enough for a perfect. 9..

Author's Response: Thanks! I know what you mean about the Near Rhymes, but I haven't written much (if any) poetry before this. It'd be cool if they had a decimal rating...

Reviewer: dekudiva Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 17, 2005 9:29 AM Title: Ganon defeated

It was good! Let me see, hmm......I don't see any mistakes, so I'll rate it a ten. Keep writing!

Author's Response: Thank you. I appreciate any encouragement from readers.



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