Reviewer: Red Sparrow Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 21, 2005 1:10 AM Title: Who's the new familia?

Judging from your intro...you WAY low self-esteem, which is ok! Uhm, right about the fic. Since I noticed you were new and this fic was floating around with chapters, I've decided to review to let you know people are actually reading this!! Anyways, the text is a bit scrunched up, double space, they keep it neat looking and easier to keep track of, I don't blame you, since the site's format thingy is messed up. What you should do is type normally on a writing program (i.e. Microsoft Word) and either paste it on or upload it (...which never worked for me) So, since I'm nice, and stuff, I'll give you a nice present and give you an 8/10.

Author's Response: -bows many many times- Thank you so much. I realize this, and will remedy it. -^^- One question, though. How can I edit other chapters of my fic? I tried to edit them, and it kept sending me back o the first one and I don't know how to get anywhere else. The Kasuto set up is new to me. -^^-''' Thanks again

Author's Response: Nevermind my editing comment, I'm just so retarded, I needed someone else to spell it out to me @.@