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sheikplayer123
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i like it alot very good

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Ré úan analuy dréine, stalfa úan an fosai a dheach á duai úan greníthin.-Sheikan

why can i not feel? why am i doomed to a life of numb destruction?
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Dream Fairy
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I <3 your poems! They're so sad though...:(

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BlackRose
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Woa. I really like the meaning, and story of it, plus, thr rhyming pattern is excellent, it's different than to what I'm used to seeing, or how I even write. Excellent job!

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Dysphoria
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Nightshade
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oh...
what happened?
whats wrong?
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Dysphoria
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Sephiroth
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I have felt exactly that way before. This is a great poem.
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Nightshade
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I know that feeling.
But you have to say something to them, well, you should
you can just try to deepen the friendship too, either one.
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sheikplayer123
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it is very poweful

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BlackRose
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Nice. Very nice indeed.

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Dysphoria
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Nightshade
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Both of them are really sad.. But i like em...
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Dysphoria
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Sephiroth
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Wow, those are kinda angry. What happened?
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Dysphoria
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Eh...it doesn't matter anymore..it's all already fixed. Me and my friend nicole argue sometimes. and i was angry at myself...i still kinda am..but ill get over it! im about ot go to pointe class so ill feel much better when i get back...what sucks though is right now i am soooooooo sore! Anyways i have a poem in my head that i will write in my mind and dance at the same time! I multitask, some people ask me how i cant do that but i just can! ^^;; ANYWAY! I will post lata!

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