Darrel
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Wow, I liked it. I mean, you feel sorry for the phantoms after reading that.
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Bongo Bill
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Posted: Sun Aug 03, 2003 8:24 am Post subject: |
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Well, actually, it was written as though from the viewpoint of Dark Link. I probably should have specified that somewhere.
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Darrel
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Posted: Sun Aug 03, 2003 8:26 am Post subject: |
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oh... Dark link. Ok. I thought it was the phantoms from WW.
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Bongo Bill
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Posted: Sun Aug 03, 2003 8:27 am Post subject: |
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Well, I can see where your confusion is coming from. After all, it's not like I gave any big hints or anything.
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Posted: Sun Aug 03, 2003 1:55 pm Post subject: |
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Nicely written poem there. I fixed a few things I assumed to be typos, hope you don't mind.
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Through fierce competition, through brawling, our glory rises.
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BlackRose
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Posted: Sun Aug 10, 2003 5:37 am Post subject: |
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Coolio! Awesome! Terific! Magnificent! Bravo! Excellent! Totally Tubular!...eh...I'm running out of compliments......Great! Unbelieveable!......Okay, I think I'm done..if I come up wit more words..hehe.....hmm...maybe a thesaurus would work......lol
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Cthulhu
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Posted: Mon Aug 11, 2003 5:34 am Post subject: |
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Absolutely amazing. Unfortunately, it reminded me of some rather disturbing Link/Dark Link yaoi I stumbled onto once. *shudder* Excuse me, I don't want to be sick all over the keyboard!
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The Master struck him with his staff. "A beautiful moment has just passed, and you were so busy talking that you missed it."
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Posted: Mon Aug 11, 2003 9:57 am Post subject: |
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That was really good, very well-written ^_^
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Moonflower
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Posted: Mon Aug 11, 2003 6:41 pm Post subject: |
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Great job Bongo Bill! 
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Lady Alaya
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Posted: Tue Aug 12, 2003 10:51 pm Post subject: |
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Wow, thats really good Bongo Bill, awsome work!
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