The Vinculum

Kasuto is now 30 years old. In recognition of this fact, I encourage all of you to give me $30. Anyone? Well, it was worth a shot. At least now I can resonably complain about "kids these days."
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 PostPosted: Wed Jun 18, 2008 1:40 pm
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[align=center]I'd write a verse with glorious love declared
Of how I'd be so faithful, kind and true
As from the greatest heights I'd be prepared
To in sheer adoration fall for you.
Your bright unclouded vault of heaven eyes
Your voice as sweet as angels' beating wings...

But words alone are not enough to prise
The vessel in which hide these treasured things.
With my unblemished heart too rash, too brisk
To tread the wary web of real ardour
I only wish for courage more to risk
That I may hazard greater passion's store.

Alas, the strength of love that can't be broken
In turn cannot be told in verses spoken.[/align]

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 PostPosted: Wed Jun 18, 2008 1:45 pm
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The above is an original sonnet composed by myself, username FightingTorque, and I don't want anyone posting this on any other website without prior permission, or worse publishing it under their own names. I shall be most upset if you do.

Comments, suggestions and feedback would be much appreciated, nonetheless. :D

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 PostPosted: Sun Jul 06, 2008 5:21 am
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A simply beautiful sonnet. Sincere and concise-may I ask who was the muse for such beautiful words?

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