The Vinculum

I sympathize with useless and your other poem titled weak. You write very well and make a good point, well done.

Dysphoria... i could argue for HOURS on how that isnt true. You. are. not. useless.. simple as that...

Whoa...it's a poem...how'd that get here?

[align=center]All is Fair With Friends and War?

I'm sick and tired of your melodrama.
Little things always seem to cause you trauma.
You say you want to feel this way.
You say you want to be melancholic everyday.
I say it's bullshit.
To me you're just a prick.
You can't even seem to solve your own problems.
Aren't you supposed to be the smart one?
You're older, so shouldn't you be more wise?
As far as I can see this friendship is done.
Even when I come to you and apologize,
I try to tell you what bothers me.
You just turn around and yell at me, you don't even try to see.
You said you were just trying to do what was right.
Then why did you persist, why didn't you just end the fight?
I never asked for you to care.
I never asked for your pity.
So, why don't you get on along now?
'Cause now, I frankly don't care when you're feeling shitty.
All is fair in friends and war, isn't it?
Well, it has to be, somehow.
So in this friendship, I quit.
This is the end of my poem,
And now I shall leave you with this;
So when you feel that something is amiss,
Remember that you can't come crawiling to me.
Got that? Okay, I'm glad you now see.
Oh, and please,
Try not to miss me!
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I want a girl who's to sad to give a f*ck...
Mmm...Snausages...
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[align=center]Dad's Sick

Dad's sick
Said the childrens mother
With tears in her eyes
A little boy asked
What if daddy dies
They all hugged and prayed
Trying so hard to not show that they were afraid
Afraid of the fathers sickness and health
The children no older than eight
Hoped that this had not been their fate
Living their childhood without a dad
What a sad thing, for these young lads
Slowly did the time fly by
The children cried
The sad day that their father died
One day they walked into a store
And purchased suits
Which is what they wore
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I want a girl who's to sad to give a f*ck...
Mmm...Snausages...
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[align=center]Sun

Light bulb, light bulb
In the sky
How'd the heck you get so high
Light bulb, light bulb
How are you so bright
Why do you burn
How do you make so much light
Light bulb, light bulb
We're a little alike
In the ways that we both go to sleep at night[/align]


Heh. I wrote this like I were a little kid, calling the sun a light bulb. lol


[align=center]Owl

Hooting in the night
Animals that hunt and fly
Soaring through the sky[/align]
Owl haiku. ^_^

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Mmm...Snausages...
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..thats cute... aww...

and well done.

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"Christ...I like your Christ. I do not like your Christians, for they are so unlike your Christ."
-Ghandi

CUTE! whoo!

okay yeah...well let me tell you...you certainly have a nice broad tastes in style. I could write like either of the "Dad's Sick" or "lightbulb"

nice work!

A....love....poem....? o_O''

[align=center]Bliss

To spend a day in your arms
Becoming bewitched by all your charms
To show affection by a hug or a kiss
Oh, how it would be bliss

At the beach, in the sand
Relaxing and holding your hand
Just to have a memory like this
Oh, how it would be bliss

Sweet things you say
When we greet everyday
A day without you, I'd never miss
Oh, how it would be bliss

Whispers in my ear
Ridding me of every fear
If you could do this
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I want a girl who's to sad to give a f*ck...
Mmm...Snausages...
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[align=center]Computer

GAH! I hate my cimputer!
It's bothering me!
Why won't these viruses let me be?
They make my compy so fricken slow.
Sometimes I feel like I'm going to blow!
Msn acts stinky,
Internet explorer is dinky!
I don't know what I'm going to do!
One more crash and I am through!
I'm tired of my computer acting so stale...
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Awww, Bliss is cute...
Computer is just funny

computer is, interesting. Bliss is very touching.

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Ré úan analuy dréine, stalfa úan an fosai a dheach á duai úan greníthin.-Sheikan

why can i not feel? why am i doomed to a life of numb destruction?

my lord, i just reread all these...
i was sharing them with a friend
i wish i never removed the earlier ones...
sadly i don't write anymore
but i have changed SO much it's crazy.

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I want a girl who's to sad to give a f*ck...
Mmm...Snausages...
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