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BlackRose
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That's a really strong poem. You guys seem like you have a strong friendshiop and love for eachotehr.

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Dysphoria
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She's one of my best friends.

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Ariane
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It's well-written, and holds much emotion. Once again, great job, and I hope that your friend is alright.
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Thats great Meggle. It really makes you think
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Oh, wow. Bravo. Hmm, do you suppose you could PM me the full poem? with the parts removed?

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Yeah, same here
Really good poems.
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*waves hand* Myself as well, I'm very interested in seeing the full poem. Great job as usual, I enjoy your writing.
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Thanks. I will tell you it on aim, Ariane.

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Its a good poem... really angsty.... but it worries me a bit about you.
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Yeah, I like it! Angsty as Shade said. I like it b/c I get images of that kind of shit happening.

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Through Time

The summer is going to be the slowest I've expirienced
It's going to be lost within the eyes of July
It's going to get colder as the ice melts away from the heat of the blood in my veins
Although that may not be possible
But of this time almost anything seems possible
The hearts will heal but the feelings may change
The greatest fears will shed into the crystal tears of August
The self breaking loneliness and the endless nights
Will be continued for the slow, cold summer
Can I hold on to those feelings of security
Will the feelings be the same when September arrives
Or with they be glass heart shattering coldness
Or perhaps more warm flowing blood leading to the loving heart
Will the feelings be faithful
Will it be the end of my heaven sent lullaby
Will we hold on the the things said and done
Will everything shape up
Will we continue on and live through more hardships together
Rather then apart
All I'd wish is that loyalty and love will continue
All I'd wish is that I could be there wish you helping you through this dark time
I hope that October can cling on to what could be
I hope that the aproaching Autumn
Won't make me fall or be rid of warm wet blood
I hope that we won't give up over the time being apart
I know I'm going to hold on, I won't let my grip slip
I hope you choose the same
As much as i'd wish to be there for you
I'm afraid I can't be at your side for the moment
I can only we there as a fragment of shadow
Watching over you silently as you sleep
All I can say is that I will be thinking of you til you come back to me with wonderful tear jerking news
And I will hope the love won't rot away during this time
As selfish as it sounds I hope you don't find somebody new either
If you do...I'll be hear as your friend and wish you the best of luck with your new love
As numb as it would make me feel
As much as I will cry
I'll be faithful and loyal
And bid you a warm loving atmosphere
I hope nothing will rot or disappear
Through this time

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