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Reviewer: Lone Soldier Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 18, 2005 8:49 PM Title: Dark Events

Please, please hurry up and finish up the story. What happens to Link and Zelda? Do they end up being g-f/b-f? When will you get the next chapter down? Otherwise, 10/10

Author's Response: I know, I'm sorry I've been taking so long. I've been having writer's block, but I am almost done with chapter 16. So no worries, it will be here before you know it.

Reviewer: triforky Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 11, 2005 4:02 PM Title: Dark Events

It's me, Chapera_Rei / Fatal_Gerudo. I just read your 15th, and I didn't even know you had it out until yesterday, because I used to read it on ZU, but they turned evil and screwed up everything so I couldn't find your story. LOL. But I'm glad I have. GOOD JOB! Can't wait to read more, and I wish you the best luck with the fanfics you're planning. 10/10

Author's Response: Thanks a bunch Triforky, it's been a long time. Great to hear from you again. ~Shrub

Reviewer: Vivian_Shadow_Siren Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 23, 2005 11:22 AM Title: Dark Events

Wow! I love this story! You know what would be cool? if you and that ZeldaFreak701 girl team up to write a story. That would be awesome. I asked her the same thing too.

Author's Response: Hm ... I've never done a team story but besides, I have a long series that I plan to finish before I start anything new. But thanks for the suggestion. ~Shrub

Reviewer: Shadow_Crawler Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 12, 2005 2:24 PM Title: Dark Events

That's really good. You are very talented. But your past tense is wrong. Instead of pasted, it's "past". And I noticed that you're using the word "Then" a lot instead of "Than". If you're having trouble, you use then like: ....then we will go to the movies. And "Than" like: This is better than. Than is comparing. Then is timing. Not to be insulting in any way. I just love grammar a lot. Anyway, I love your story!

Author's Response: lol, don't worry about that I noticed it after a while myself. I'm in the process of editing my chapters after I learned proper grammar (shameful isn't it?), so don't worry I finally got some brains after writing this fic for almost a whole year (so far I have been writing this fan fic for 10 months). So eventually you will have an edited version of this with proper grammar. Thanks for the review. ~Shrub

Reviewer: Evil King Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 02, 2005 7:41 PM Title: Dark Events

Good as usual!

Reviewer: MIsta Sinista Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 08, 2004 1:31 PM Title: Dark Events

I loved that chapter, well, at the end, at least. For once Rontu actually showed that he cared for Leita in front of the others. Their love is so unique....

Author's Response: Yes, Rontu and Leita are my favorite couple. Hm ... mostly becuz their love is so unusual. Thank you very much. ~Shrub

Reviewer: Hyperlink Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: Nov 08, 2004 11:57 AM Title: Dark Events

This is really quite good. I started reading it a while ago but never got around to dropping a review. Although the idea of having Hyrule conquered has been done before, and will again, the idea with using Dark elves was an interesting touch. You have also done interesting character traits and developements. After you finish this one, you might want to try a prequal. Excellent job!

Author's Response: Thank you. I didn't know someone has done Hyrule being conquered before. I don't care, I am certain that my story will be different in many ways. Yes, I love dark elves. I think they are the most impressive dark race there is. Moblins and such things were getting boring so I decided to add dark elves from the world I created. Most of my characters, of which I have made up, are from that world. I am also very pleased to hear you think my characters are interesting. Hm ... a prequal ... that thought has never reached me. I will think about it ... it would make an interesting story, one that would be from mostly Zelda and Malon's perspectives. Thanks for your review. ~Shrub

Reviewer: Total Darkness Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: Sep 18, 2004 10:11 PM Title: Dark Events

This is a very interesting story. I must say...it's got me stuck on it. The plot seems good and I think some real cool things could happen in this story. ^_^ I'm glad you like my story....and I'm having one heck of a good time writing it, but that is beside the point. This is a good start to a story, that I think, that'll be really cool! Only complaint I have is....you need a slight grammer check. It's not that bad at all, but it kept itching my brain and I thought I should let you know.....but don't let me slow you down. XD When I get more time.....I shall read more. ^_^ I'm sure you'll like my story like I'm liking yours......I think I'm rambling now. XD Bad habit!!! Please keep going with this!!!

Author's Response: No, you're not rambling. I like to hear someone is enjoying my story and that I have made mistakes with grammer. I'm afraid I'm not much with good spelling or grammer I have an editer but I didn't have one for the first chapter. I promise you that the other chapters are edited. I don't care much for going back to edit the first chapter because it's just pratice for writing. That's why I'm writing this fan fic. I'm practicing for my book I plan to write. So if I make a few mistakes it's not much of a problem for me, but it is something I need to work on. Anyway, I really enjoyed your story. No one has ever written Link like that. Well, what I mean is no one has written him as a villan. Except for my editer anyway. But in the way he wrote it was still like Link was in a very big inner conflict with himself and still the victim of the story. Oops, now I'm rambling. Thank you very much not many people have reviewed my story so I am very thankful. ~Shrub

Reviewer: bloodsword Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 13, 2004 3:14 PM Title: Dark Events

hey, your story is just as good. this is probably my like 5th time reading it, and its still awesome. by the way, im submitting The Binding Fate onto here.

Author's Response: Kool, I'll be sure to review it. I haven't read chapter five or six, gotta catch up. Thanks for the review. ~Shrub

Reviewer: MIsta Sinista Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 10, 2004 10:49 PM Title: Dark Events

Perhaps among the most worthy stories ever posted on this site. The thing that makes Empire of Darkness my preferred story is--first of all, the interesting plot that will only increase in quality as the story moves forward. Along with that, the description to clearly reveal your characters and surroundings is no less than amazing, as well as the fine use of figurative language that seems to remain immortal throughout each individual chapter. Others should be reading this, as the author of this story assures in her writing the entertainment of readers and all that stuff. To put it simple, if your read the first chapter, most likely you'll get hooked. I expect a lot of positive reviews to this story, and Jessi, you're amazing! This may become one of the most prominent stories in this site!!!

Author's Response: Stop you're making me blush! Thanks so much Stev. That means a lot to me when you say that. But I'm afraid you are giving me too much credit. You did edited all my chapters so I must thank you. And you are by far a better writer then I. ~Shrub



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